SAT句子改错题[The poet Claude McKay was a native of Jamaica whosp

SAT句子改错题

[The poet Claude McKay was a native of Jamaica who

spent most of his life in the United States but writing]

some of his poems in the Jamaican dialect.

(A) The poet Claude McKay was a native of Jamaica

who spent most of his life in the United States

but writing

(B) Being that he was a Jamaican who spent

most of his life in the United States,the

poet Claude McKay writing

(C) Although a native of Jamaica,the poet Claude

McKay spent most of his life in the United

States,he wrote

(D) Although the poet Claude McKay spent

most of his life in the United States,he

was a native of Jamaica and wrote

(E) Because he was a native of Jamaica who spent

most of his life in the United States,the poet

Claude McKay writing

我想问问,为什么原句不行,以及换成E的理由是什么.最好也能帮我分析分析其他选项.

问答/200℃/2024-11-06 12:35:48

优质解答：

LZ,我觉得应该选择D,原因是这样的：

由于这个是规范化考试,注重语法和语言逻辑结果的.这么说吧,and是表示并列,but是表示转折的,这个大家都理解,那么既然用了这种连词,前后的句型时态是要完全一致的.

这个句子原句前面用的时态是一般过去式,动词时“Spent”,那么后面也要是一般过去式,动词应该是“wrote”这样才能符合前后一致.

A.根据上面的分析,不应该用writing；

B.“that he was ”是不需要的成分,同事如果是这样的话,Wirting也是不对的,应该用Wrote；

C.Although后面没有主语,最严重的错误是逗号后面直接开始“he wrote...”这个是最不应该用的句法,因为这是另外一个句子,而中间没有连接词了,需要加"and".切忌---正规语法中,逗号后面如果没有连词,不可以接句子.

D.D其实看上去很正确,但是这种用法很少见,应该是he was a native of Jamaica who wrote...这样比较正确.

E.E其实看上去有很多问题,首先是它将原句的转折关系改变成为因果关系；最重要的是,这个句子没有谓语动词了!writing是不能作为谓语的,应该是wrote.

根据上面的分析,我认为D是对的.

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